When you fall in love
You cannot fall out
Is that why
You make me want to shout?
I want to scream
At the sight of your face
At the moments we shared
Gone to waste.
I want to shriek
At the energy spent
Trying to figure you out
And your sly comments.
I want to squeal
With the frustration you brought
With the precious memories
You forgot.
I want to yell
To the heavens
For giving me a reason
To cry.
When you fall in love
You cannot fall out
That is why
My heart is worn out.
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Lovely!
Another piece filled with emotions that make you go uhgr!
lol. thank you ^_^ i love your comments!
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it’s a pleasure to comment cuz I really enjoy your writing!!
Been there, felt that. But i could have never expressed it so eloquently. If i may ask, is it something that you expressed out of past experience or are you a skillful writer?
I would like to think a little of both ;] lol. I tried to come up with a better answer for you, and after agonizing over it all night this was all I could think of to say ( -_-)
No problem! This answer is fair enough. A skillful writer you are, no doubts, but i just wished to know if it had any past attached to it. Thank for the reply. Will stay connected to you for more! Happy Blogging!
To better answer your question there is some past attached to the poem, but it was like one of those things that kept coming up, you know? It was a feeling that had lasted several years and is brought to the surface every time the person showed up. And that is how I birthed this poem ;]